The drops of nature

nature is so beautiful ... I wish all of us could be so much more tuned to it...

The drops of nature

 

 

 

Nature is beautiful, powerful, logical…

Give 1 drop of kindness…

It would end up domestical.

 

Nature is glamorous, fabulous, adventurous…

Give 2 drops of awareness…

It would turn affectuous.

 

Nature is inspiring, adorning, breathtaking…

Give 3 drops of love…

Its roots will then start burgeoning.

 

Nature is sweet, complete, discreet…

Give 4 drops of respect…

Its favors in return, no mortal can beat.

 

Nature is elegant, acceptant, conservant…

Give 5 drops of humbleness

Its response would be nurturant.

 

And we can keep on adding drops…

Of excellent qualities….

Nature has fields full of crops…

And oceans of bounties.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for your time reading me :)

Reviews

[Rachel U.]

Be very, very careful with your ellipses. Authors overuse them WAY too much - and you're pushing it a little bit here. Oftentimes a dash or a period can produce much the same effect without looking unprofessional.
Anyways, while not very new/revolutionary, it still managed to be cute and slightly imaginative. Instead of relying totally on descriptive adjectives, work more with imagery through metaphors/similes/personification/etc. I think that might have bettered this poem.
Overall, nice work. :)