Hidden Words

There’s a lot I need to say,

There’s a lot you need to know;

Much of this will never be said,

Almost all of this will always be lost.

These feelings I’m harboring are mine;

I’ll keep them from you if I please.

They are of no significance to you,

So why should you learn?

If these things that are hidden

Have no impact on the things going on,

Then saying them aloud is merely a waste,

A waste of my breath and a piece of my heart.

Just know I’ll always be here,

Know that I’ll always care;

But these things you will never know.

Author's Note

another poem for another day, mumbles from my mind.

Reviews

[Matthew Smith]

Most poems I've read on this site always blatantly tell you something--no metaphors, no symbolism, just straight-written-statements, like some sort of shoddily written confession for the viewers to skim over. This is probably the first that tells the reader nothing at all. And I mean that in a good way.

Good job.

[hanir]

I feel you! I've been there...or I should say I'm still there. Lol.
Nicely written!

[Wórdsmíth]

Excellent work!! The poem`s seemed as beautiful as you... full of incense. My fav. lines:

"There’s a lot I need to say,
There’s a lot you need to know;
Much of this will never be said,
Almost all of this will always be lost."

I re-read such lines bunches of times and found the depth which`s all `bout "love" because, it`s in love that ... "there`s "always" allot to say but never or less to know and very and tiredly much to say but everything gets lost". You write quiet deep stuffs. Liked your work!

[kumars]

very well poem nice thought i liked it.

[Tracey C.]

I love this! Very good. Agree with this very much.

[Antonio Valentino]

I can relate with this so well. I love the way you put this into words, I enjoyed this immensely!

Antonio

[Forest Green]

Rotating thoughts, a true symptom of the blue fly humming...echoing in the room, down the halls of the mind...

Hopefully...the answers arrive in time.

Good work....

[Steve]

Excellent write! I read this several times. I think its extremely well written....I agree with it too.