Heal the Sained

Heal the Sained

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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A song, needs a beat, any ideas?

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how are we gonna make it in this world of ours
Where everybody's drivin' planes, trains, or cars
And people gettin' drunk in all the bars
the sky's the limit but we have machines on Mars
and they tell us that the world is ours

To change
Rearrange
blessed the pained
Heal the sained

I don't know where I'll be tomorrow
I know I won't drown in my sorrow
I won't be another soul to go
Everybody else will hit the bottle
I'll be the one standing on top though

To change
rearrange
bless the pained
Heal the sained

This is me it's who I am
and I don't care if you give a dam
I'll be driving through town
Get out of my way just scram
I don't need you bringing me down

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

That's my goal
that much I know
I won't fall into the hole
even if I grow old
I will still fight for what I hold

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
Heal the sained

this is my game
My fame
No dame
Only my name
it's all the same

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

Living in this place we call the earth
where we were at our birth
And our death
When nothing's left
my soul still won't rest

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

Same story it's getting old
always do what you're told
But I want my fate to hold
till I've showed
That I won't go cold

To change
Rearrange
Bless the pained
Heal the sained


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


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It's rhymey. You've written better/

The repeating part is really deep

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

thanks
Love it! make it into a song @[email protected] !!! with guitar or piano or something !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Guitar. Rock on!
Soulfulbubbles

8 Years Ago

XD F**k yeah!
I like the way you begin with some social commentry and a good moan, I just love the chorus, super ideas and clever usage of words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you for translating my thoughts into words for me. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

I didn't know I was doing that. I thought they were just mine lol
Skia1717

8 Years Ago

so did I lol
I want this song and I want it now.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Now this is a song I would buy! I love the lyrics! They are very passionate!

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's beautiful. Writing songs, I've found, can be a real challenge, but you presented this nicely. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved it.. its so inspiring! The rhyming is really cool and... I like the repetition of
the chorus. You've done a really good job with this...



Posted 8 Years Ago


Awesome poem, I like it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pax
a song, i like the repeating of the chorus. good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Harley (arbiter)

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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