Heal the Sained

A song, needs a beat, any ideas?

how are we gonna make it in this world of ours
Where everybody's drivin' planes, trains, or cars
And people gettin' drunk in all the bars
the sky's the limit but we have machines on Mars
and they tell us that the world is ours

To change
Rearrange
blessed the pained
Heal the sained

I don't know where I'll be tomorrow
I know I won't drown in my sorrow
I won't be another soul to go
Everybody else will hit the bottle
I'll be the one standing on top though

To change
rearrange
bless the pained
Heal the sained

This is me it's who I am
and I don't care if you give a dam
I'll be driving through town
Get out of my way just scram
I don't need you bringing me down

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

That's my goal
that much I know
I won't fall into the hole
even if I grow old
I will still fight for what I hold

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
Heal the sained

this is my game
My fame
No dame
Only my name
it's all the same

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

Living in this place we call the earth
where we were at our birth
And our death
When nothing's left
my soul still won't rest

To change
rearrange
Bless the pained
heal the sained

Same story it's getting old
always do what you're told
But I want my fate to hold
till I've showed
That I won't go cold

To change
Rearrange
Bless the pained
Heal the sained

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

It's rhymey. You've written better/

The repeating part is really deep

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Soulfulbubbles]

Love it! make it into a song @.@ !!! with guitar or piano or something !

[Harley (arbiter)]

Guitar. Rock on!

[Soulfulbubbles]

XD F**k yeah!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I like the way you begin with some social commentry and a good moan, I just love the chorus, super ideas and clever usage of words.

[Skia1717]

Thank you for translating my thoughts into words for me. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I didn't know I was doing that. I thought they were just mine lol

[Skia1717]

so did I lol

[Weeping Willow]

I want this song and I want it now.

[deepblue04]

Now this is a song I would buy! I love the lyrics! They are very passionate!

[Freckled Princess]

It's beautiful. Writing songs, I've found, can be a real challenge, but you presented this nicely. :)

[Aehr]

I loved it.. its so inspiring! The rhyming is really cool and... I like the repetition of
the chorus. You've done a really good job with this...

[Miranda Richard]

Awesome poem, I like it :)

[Pax]

a song, i like the repeating of the chorus. good job.