We're Stars

We're Stars

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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Inspired by the song "Stars" by Hear N' Aid

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We are strong,
We are fire and stone

We are there
We free you from despair

Our music fils your soul
It's what pulls you out of the hole

When you are feeling the cold
We'll help you be bold

Our beats are in your heart
That's where it all really starts

When your feeling down
Listen to our sound

We'll get you back on your feet
The guitar solo you'll greet

We'll free your soul
To get lost in rock and roll

In the still of the night
Do not get a fright

Sweet child of mine
No need to commit a crime

Don't fear the reaper
He's not a creeper

Its more than a feeling
The music were dealing

Rock hard ride free
Float like a cadallac sting like a bee

Learning to fly
Don't fall from too high

You give love a bad name
But its gotten us our fame

Hair of the dog
Rise up from the fog

When you need help
No need to yelp

When doves cry
No need to lie

Listen to our sound
Always keep it around

Rock and roll
Never leaves you dull

We are strong
We are fire and stone

We are magic in the night
We are shadow we are light

We are forever
You and I

We're stars!
We're stars!
We're stars!
We're stars!
We're stars! With the beating our heart
We're stars!
We're stars! Its beginning with a start
We're stars!


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)


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Smashing! Each stanza was unqiue but flowed with such beauty. I did find quite a few spelling errors, though:
First stanza: no real problems, but my advice is to omit that comma, since you don't use commas anywhere else in the piece
Third stanza: *fills
Sixth stanza: *you're
Eigth stanza: well, there's no error per se, but I would delete the "to."
Twelfth stanza: *it's also, *we're

Other than that, I loved this. It was very inspirational and made me smile. My favorite:
"Rock hard ride free
Float like a Cadillac sting like a bee"
I quite enjoyed this! Nice work, and thanks for sharing!

Happy writing,
Savannah

Posted 8 Years Ago


thanks, should check out the video of the song on my status :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


wowww..amazing ...it went straight into my heart ...this one is my favorite...good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweet Child O' Mine, Don't Fear The Reaper, When Doves Cry, Learning To Fly- All my favourite songs! Nice work, Harley. Keep the awesome work coming.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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