cities on flame with my soul

cities on flame with my soul

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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Parody of blue oyster cult's "cities on flame with rock and roll"

"
My heart is black
And my lips are cold
Cities on flame
With my soul

3 thousand mortars
They seem to fire
My heart will melt
And then ill cry

So let the bombs
Let them bombs
Hit and explode
Because pain and hurt
Is all I know

Gardens of flowers
Pretty in the light
Just a burning field
In the night

Cities on flame
With my soul
Watch my anger
Burn out of control

So let the bomb
let them bombs
rain down on my soul
cause pain and hurt
is all i know


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


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yes, I do like the song. Rock and Roll nation!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing this! It reminded me I need to put up the finished one! :D thanks!
So it sounds like this speaker knows pain. maybe the mood is nice and strong, but the meaning is weak because I have no idea what happened to the poor guy. Guy/girl. All i know is life sucks and the narrator oughtta die or kill himself/herself

Posted 7 Years Ago


extreme - concise

Posted 7 Years Ago


This one had a lot of anger .___. But great all the same!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Thank yooou! ^_^
That's really good. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

thanks
nice i really i like this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Thanks
Mazie Tackett

8 Years Ago

k
Flows nicely as a song. It's an inspiration! (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice beginning for the song. I look forward to see where you are taking this song. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
make a good song lyric...go out and buy a guitar

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Would if I could :D
I like how u gave the reader a clear image of what you were trying describe and i luv it how u write.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Harley (arbiter)
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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