cities on flame with my soul

cities on flame with my soul

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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Parody of blue oyster cult's "cities on flame with rock and roll"

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My heart is black
And my lips are cold
Cities on flame
With my soul

3 thousand mortars
They seem to fire
My heart will melt
And then ill cry

So let the bombs
Let them bombs
Hit and explode
Because pain and hurt
Is all I know

Gardens of flowers
Pretty in the light
Just a burning field
In the night

Cities on flame
With my soul
Watch my anger
Burn out of control

So let the bomb
let them bombs
rain down on my soul
cause pain and hurt
is all i know


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


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It sounded nice... I like the image being portrayed cities on fire, being compared to your burning soul... Powerful..

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Posted 8 Years Ago


i liked it.. you should continue it.. its really good till here, I'm sure when you write the rest of it, it'll be even better.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


it sounds really good on the moment!

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Posted 8 Years Ago


the start of something good. keep it up.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


you left out the b in the second bombs i think. Anyhow, it's really good!

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice! I love the first stanza... keep going! :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


that's pretty sick man. the second stanza is my favourite! good work

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Can't get the riff out of my head.....

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Deep and sad. Excellent write Harley :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Hmm...This is quite dark and interesting! I LIKE IT!

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Posted 8 Years Ago



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Harley (arbiter)
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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