cities on flame with my soul

Parody of blue oyster cult's "cities on flame with rock and roll"

My heart is black
And my lips are cold
Cities on flame
With my soul

3 thousand mortars
They seem to fire
My heart will melt
And then ill cry

So let the bombs
Let them bombs
Hit and explode
Because pain and hurt
Is all I know

Gardens of flowers
Pretty in the light
Just a burning field
In the night

Cities on flame
With my soul
Watch my anger
Burn out of control

So let the bomb
let them bombs
rain down on my soul
cause pain and hurt
is all i know

Author's Note

Not done yet

Reviews

[Fréyjä Helv..]

It sounded nice... I like the image being portrayed cities on fire, being compared to your burning soul... Powerful..

[Aehr]

i liked it.. you should continue it.. its really good till here, I'm sure when you write the rest of it, it'll be even better.

[deepblue04]

it sounds really good on the moment!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

the start of something good. keep it up.

[T. Logan]

you left out the b in the second bombs i think. Anyhow, it's really good!

[That_Girl]

Nice! I love the first stanza... keep going! :)

[nigrum homonculus]

that's pretty sick man. the second stanza is my favourite! good work

[The Analog Kid]

Can't get the riff out of my head.....

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Deep and sad. Excellent write Harley :)

[Melody]

Hmm...This is quite dark and interesting! I LIKE IT!