moved on

moved on

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)

just threw together from a few lines from a song. thanks erika for the topic ^_^ and its not my best but its ok

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
I gave you all of me
Put you first in line
What a waste of time

I was always yours
You were never mine
How could you leave me standing outside?

...

Because your cold
Nothing near bold

Hiding behind your time
Begging to steal mine

I have better things to do
Then deal with a b¡tch like you

I drive off in my Trans Am
Or my Dodge Ram
Knowing I don't give a [email protected]

And I hope you know
Reap what you sow
Your not the dead weight I'm gonna tow

You think its my loss
Well your the boss

You said move on
Well now I'm gone

And I'm happy and gittery
Because I'm free as can be

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wow, this is very amazing! good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


..yeah
that's the smell of freedom
=]

Posted 7 Years Ago


great job amazing poem i can relate mann

Posted 7 Years Ago


JITTERY

I hate when people spell it with a "g".

YOu think it's my loss?
Well you're the boss.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I drive off in my trans am or dodge ram knowing I don't give a damn. HA!
Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like how you find good in a negative situation. Its clear you weren't too happy but you were strong enough to keep your head up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


keep writing to feed your integrety

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your strong and it shows... It hurts you, but not bad enough to bring you down... nice job

Posted 8 Years Ago


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wow, i love it! very well said! your great with words, which is an awesome and very sought after writers trai! ^_^ nicely done my friend.
-mariah

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Thanks
mariah

8 Years Ago

your welcome
ok who's this about and text me dude you meantioned food earlier and i got hungry left the phone then when i finished eating you never texted me back grrrrrr this is all pizzas fault it was sooo tempting and i was sooo hungry fat girl gotta eat.......PIZZZA lol oh and pretty good poem


Posted 8 Years Ago


Mazie Tackett

8 Years Ago

well i am whether you believe it or not
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Well your not whether you believe it or not
Mazie Tackett

8 Years Ago

i am

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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