moved on

just threw together from a few lines from a song. thanks erika for the topic ^_^ and its not my best but its ok

Author's Note

I gave you all of me
Put you first in line
What a waste of time

I was always yours
You were never mine
How could you leave me standing outside?

...

Because your cold
Nothing near bold

Hiding behind your time
Begging to steal mine

I have better things to do
Then deal with a b¡tch like you

I drive off in my Trans Am
Or my Dodge Ram
Knowing I don't give a d@m

And I hope you know
Reap what you sow
Your not the dead weight I'm gonna tow

You think its my loss
Well your the boss

You said move on
Well now I'm gone

And I'm happy and gittery
Because I'm free as can be

Reviews

[Jordan A. Wilson]

your stuff is getting better and better keep it up.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks man

[Freckled Princess]

Beautiful. (:
It's not too. . . mushy, but it leaves a sympathetic feeling.
Good work.

[Aehr]

i think its amazing! i like the emotion you have put in...

[Dr. Wood ?]

gittery is not a word...but it IS a great one....

[Harley (arbiter)]

I thought it was, and thanks

[natzky]

i agree with rebellion romance, this piece is definitely one of your best...heheh...double like..:)

[Sophie]

I like this :)
just curious, did you mean 'glittery' and it was just a typo? or is gittery a word I didn't know existed? (there are quite a few of those XD)
Great poem, keep writing

[Harley (arbiter)]

Gittery. Like uh jittery but diferent. A form of happiness :D thanks

[Sophie]

ooooh lolol you're welcome

[Erika Jones]

"And I'm happy and gittery
Because i'm as free as I can be"

That's how my mind reads those last two lines .___. But either way, great poem! I knew you could make something with what I gave you! xD!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks!

[Erika Jones]

Always welcome :) Heehee

[T. Logan]

It's pretty strong.I really like it!

[RachelReaper]

ROCK SONG!!!!! :)

[A. V. Madison]

Oh snap! I totally loved this. Maybe even one of your best. It's powerful, it's raw, it's witty, it's going into my library.

[Harley (arbiter)]

One of my best? Nah, but everything else sure :) thanks