moved on

just threw together from a few lines from a song. thanks erika for the topic ^_^ and its not my best but its ok

Author's Note

I gave you all of me
Put you first in line
What a waste of time

I was always yours
You were never mine
How could you leave me standing outside?

...

Because your cold
Nothing near bold

Hiding behind your time
Begging to steal mine

I have better things to do
Then deal with a b¡tch like you

I drive off in my Trans Am
Or my Dodge Ram
Knowing I don't give a d@m

And I hope you know
Reap what you sow
Your not the dead weight I'm gonna tow

You think its my loss
Well your the boss

You said move on
Well now I'm gone

And I'm happy and gittery
Because I'm free as can be

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks everybody

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is so amazing, emotional and powerful. You even did a nice rhythm to the poem.
You did a magnificent job!
100/100

[afra]

wow...powerful and strong ..i loved it ...well done harley

[Melody]

:) I personally enjoyed this and I can easily relate. Good job.

[Gothic Girl]

damn right! don't hold on to a person who doesn't want you anymore. really great piece here! :))

[nigrum homonculus]

you tell em bro! that was sick

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well thanks I guess. That's good I suppose :D

[nigrum homonculus]

what it really was!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well I didn't think it was that great but alright I guess. Thanks bro

[nigrum homonculus]

no prob :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hey it kinda reminds me of your one poem.. forgot the name.

[nigrum homonculus]

words to an ex?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yep! That 'un right there!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow! I really, really like this! It's like.... BAM! I'm in charge, b¡tches! XP

[Harley (arbiter)]

XD well thanks I'm glad you liked it

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

I did! Your welcome :3

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Wonderful write!
You have so much passion!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it ^_^