gift from me to you!

gift from me to you!

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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Made up in about a minute.

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i just made this up. it has some meaning but i think i kinda veered off topic in the last line. i ran out of ideas

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
You say my writings awesome
And I don't think that its true

The reason why you like it
Its not me its cause of you

Its how you take the emotion out of my writing
And experiencing it yourself all the way until its through

Its not just words and writing
Its a gift from me to you!

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the thought process it amazing! I like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the thought behind this

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wait who says it's awesome?



Everyone? Chhh.... Or is the author's note a poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


You speak.... the TRUTH!!!!! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice advice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


So writers are like Santa. WOW!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

yes lol
Good flow and rhyme!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

thanks man!
The Analog Kid

7 Years Ago

YW
When I read that you are only 14 and you can write something so meaningful I am absolutlely astounded....I never once said your writing was awesome but this is quiet simply put the emotion of every writer I think....Every writer including myself thinks they are terrible at what they do and need that spark and energy of people reading their stuff and reviewing it like they actually read it...Not just saying "Oh this is good" or "Oh this sucked" Because those my friend are a writers worst enemy...You know the reviewer spent no time or effort on reading anything...They just wrote a review...You say its how people take the emotion out of your writing which could be a problem....But most of this poem is powerful, to the point, and most of all so very, very true...Good job!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

thanks for your thoughts and thanks for reading.
the truthfulness is there
very universal in a sense
=]

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it. Mostly because it's simple and to the point. the rhyme's pretty cool too.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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