Grenade!

Parody of eric clapton's "cocaine"

ok i couldnt sleep and was listening to "cocaine" by eric clapton to drift off into sleep then i thought of what a friend said that we should do a parody collaboration theeeeeen i thought of halo theeeeeeeeeeeen i thought of grenades then i made this! lol its kinda weird how i just went through probably the worst day of my life and wrote a kinda funny parody. it dont exactly fit with the orig. song but it was just for fun lol

Author's Note

Breaking into a room
Wanna make a big boom
Grenade!
Want them go down
No clowning around
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

If your about to lose
And wanna make a move
Grenade!
If ya wanna hear an bang
Throw that thang
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

If your ammo's gone
And ya wanna keep on
Grenade!
When ya pull the pin
Can't put it back in
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Haha, this reminded me of FPS video games, especially that part "If your ammo's gone...". Good job, it's really funny.

Oh, I have to ask, what's up with posting work in the Author's Note section? I noticed it a while ago on your work, and now I see Kenzie is doing the same for some of her stuff.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Weeeeel its because the moble site suuuuuuuucks and there's a problem with the actually box, sooooooo to make our poems look all nice and pretty we put it in a box where we can hit enter! Lol and yep it was kinda inspired a little by HALO

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Yeah, I figured it was something like that. That's why I hate going here on my mobile phone.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its secretly because were weirdos from another planet but don't tell anyone ok? Lol

[Tomislav Petricevic]

lol, ok, I just hope you don't enslave the human race. XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

O.O *puts down plasma gun* no. Not at all....

[♪Barklight♪]

What? well, there goes the univers.... kidding! kidding! *runs and hides from plasma gun*

[Harley (arbiter)]

*Throws plasma grenade where your hiding*

[♪Barklight♪]

RUUUUUNNNN!!!! lolz, is this an rp site now?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. Yes it is

[♪Barklight♪]

Hey! I could make one of those....... idea!

[Harley (arbiter)]

one of what!?!?! A plasma grenade or rp site? Lol

[♪Barklight♪]

lol an rp site! calm down! (if i tried to make a plasma grenade i'd have to explain why there's a crator in my room....)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh well cool. If you do send me a link. And uh if you try the other thing uh. Send me a free sample. 20 will do lol xD

[♪Barklight♪]

lol! will try soon, maby some sort of gadget too. no plasma garentees but still.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hey whatever works lol

[deepblue04]

this is a rather interesting song... Good job!!!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

haha i can dig it. cocaine is a hell of song.

[Gothic Girl]

haha. a lot of action going on here. love it!

[Laura Maidah]

Listening to cocaine?? Oooh I'm intrigued. Literally mouth drying ...


Poem makes me wet.

[Baby Ricochet]

I kind of remember that song. Before my time.Funny poem though. You shoud see the carnage a mark 19 granade launcher can lay down.

[RachelReaper]

I was cracking up through this whole thing, nicely done parody. Kept me smiling :)

[Michael G.]

Got my attention. (As I cautiously come back into the room.)

[Harley (arbiter)]

:D smart move lol thanks

[Fréyjä Helv..]

I enjoyed this one... lol... Good job...

[J. F. Charleston]

That's somthing to do. Just run and throw a grenade.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

such a dangerous, volitile, unpredictable weapon and subject to tackle, which intreigued me about this poem and the ugly consequences are not addressed, deliberatley I suppose. I like this climatic ...dramatic content....well structured though not comfortable.