Grenade!

Grenade!

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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Parody of eric clapton's "cocaine"

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ok i couldnt sleep and was listening to "cocaine" by eric clapton to drift off into sleep then i thought of what a friend said that we should do a parody collaboration theeeeeen i thought of halo theeeeeeeeeeeen i thought of grenades then i made this! lol its kinda weird how i just went through probably the worst day of my life and wrote a kinda funny parody. it dont exactly fit with the orig. song but it was just for fun lol


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Breaking into a room
Wanna make a big boom
Grenade!
Want them go down
No clowning around
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

If your about to lose
And wanna make a move
Grenade!
If ya wanna hear an bang
Throw that thang
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

If your ammo's gone
And ya wanna keep on
Grenade!
When ya pull the pin
Can't put it back in
Grenade!
Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

Better run
Better run
Better run
Grenade!

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Haha, this reminded me of FPS video games, especially that part "If your ammo's gone...". Good job, it's really funny.

Oh, I have to ask, what's up with posting work in the Author's Note section? I noticed it a while ago on your work, and now I see Kenzie is doing the same for some of her stuff.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

Oh well cool. If you do send me a link. And uh if you try the other thing uh. Send me a free sample... read more
♪Barklight♪

7 Years Ago

lol! will try soon, maby some sort of gadget too. no plasma garentees but still.
Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

Hey whatever works lol



Reviews

this is a rather interesting song... Good job!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


haha i can dig it. cocaine is a hell of song.

Posted 7 Years Ago


haha. a lot of action going on here. love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Listening to cocaine?? Oooh I'm intrigued. Literally mouth drying ...


Poem makes me wet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I kind of remember that song. Before my time.Funny poem though. You shoud see the carnage a mark 19 granade launcher can lay down.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I was cracking up through this whole thing, nicely done parody. Kept me smiling :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Got my attention. (As I cautiously come back into the room.)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

:D smart move lol thanks
I enjoyed this one... lol... Good job...

Posted 7 Years Ago


That's somthing to do. Just run and throw a grenade.

Posted 7 Years Ago


such a dangerous, volitile, unpredictable weapon and subject to tackle, which intreigued me about this poem and the ugly consequences are not addressed, deliberatley I suppose. I like this climatic ...dramatic content....well structured though not comfortable.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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