highway of my life

highway of my life

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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Parody of zbb "highway 20 ride"

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i dont think its all that good. it doesnt flow with the song at some points and it just came to me while i couldnt sleep.  its for some people in my life that i cant live without. one especially in mind but all of them aswell if that makes any sense. thanks for reading and tell me what you think its about or what kinda feeling you got from reading it :]


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
I ride away inside of me
Whenever I need to be free
When I need to leave it all behind

I never meant to scold you
By the things that I told you
It just seems I always get it wrong

So I'll drive
And I'll think about my life
And wonder why
That I slowly die inside

Everytime I try to get it down
But I just end up cryin'
And I think of the days
And the moments
I've spent with you
On the higway of my life

The day might come you'll realise
That I could bring my own demise
And you could've brought me out

And its true you might hate me
That ill be the one you don't want to see
But just remember, I always gave my all

And ill drive
And ill think about my life
And wonder why
That I slowly die inside

Everyday that I'm without you
Its in the back of my mind
And I remember the days
And the times
I've spent with you
On the highway of my life

So when you cry
And you want me to die
I hope you smile
And remember all our times
You brought fire into my life
And I cherished the light

And my whole mind
Begins and ends with us
On the highway of my life

Of my life
My life!
Highway of my life
And I'll ride!

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I like this its really sweet and it sounds like u were hurt by someone u cared deeply for so I am sorry


Posted 8 Years Ago


i love the way you place the poem the speaker seems regretful and hurt but at a strange peace knowing that they don't have a weight upon them anymore

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
marie

8 Years Ago

No problem I enjoy your work:)
very good! I get the feeling of the speaker being crushed in a relationship by his one true love

Posted 8 Years Ago


Every part was amazing i felt joy and freedom iin it. i don't have aot of words to describe this all i can say was " What made u write this awesome peice?"

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

A few things actually lol
Mariah Corey

8 Years Ago

lol. well whatever they are, its amazing. :D
this is really a good song. great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Tay
This would make a beautiful song.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is not a song or performance piece. It's a brilliant visual and great poem/ Last stanza makes it dazzling.

Posted 8 Years Ago


If you can sing or know somebody that can put this to a good beat I think this could be an excelent song! It has the lyrics of an instant classic

Posted 8 Years Ago


good poem :) highway is a fun metaphor for life..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Good write, this one reminds me of someone too. Your good at writing songs, ya know that? Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

LIAR! I'm not good lol thanks ^_^
♪Barklight♪

8 Years Ago

yes you are!
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

I refuse to accept the truith!

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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