highway of my life

Parody of zbb "highway 20 ride"

i dont think its all that good. it doesnt flow with the song at some points and it just came to me while i couldnt sleep.  its for some people in my life that i cant live without. one especially in mind but all of them aswell if that makes any sense. thanks for reading and tell me what you think its about or what kinda feeling you got from reading it :]

Author's Note

I ride away inside of me
Whenever I need to be free
When I need to leave it all behind

I never meant to scold you
By the things that I told you
It just seems I always get it wrong

So I'll drive
And I'll think about my life
And wonder why
That I slowly die inside

Everytime I try to get it down
But I just end up cryin'
And I think of the days
And the moments
I've spent with you
On the higway of my life

The day might come you'll realise
That I could bring my own demise
And you could've brought me out

And its true you might hate me
That ill be the one you don't want to see
But just remember, I always gave my all

And ill drive
And ill think about my life
And wonder why
That I slowly die inside

Everyday that I'm without you
Its in the back of my mind
And I remember the days
And the times
I've spent with you
On the highway of my life

So when you cry
And you want me to die
I hope you smile
And remember all our times
You brought fire into my life
And I cherished the light

And my whole mind
Begins and ends with us
On the highway of my life

Of my life
My life!
Highway of my life
And I'll ride!

Reviews

[harry]

good job man ....i can relate to this in a lot of ways

[Tabitha t]

When I opened this up I imagined a fast paced upbeat tone and I read it this way. idk if you meant it as a fast or slow song but I liked this

[T. Logan]

I see your songs on here, and it kind of makes me jealous. Because I can't do songs, let alone songs with actual meaning, like yours.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I bet you could if you tried.

[T. Logan]

we'll see. :P

[David the writer]

Wow, great lyrics! At times the metaphor seemed a bit overused, but not a bad amount. Though the metaphor it self was awesome

[RachelReaper]

Awesome job! Much better than the songs I have written... eheheheheh.... coolness!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

A very good realease of emotional components, written to self and a significant other? A promising and determinded ending - which was neccessary.

[Fréyjä Helv..]

It was kinda gloomy and sincere... You seem to have a hard time fixing yourself and ending up hurting someone else.. I mean that's my opinion.... Nice work though...

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yep that's pretty much it right there

[deepblue04]

This is still good lol! I love it so much!

[Abbie]

amazing Harley, I love the poem/song (even If I've never heard the song it's a parody of). You really are a great poet/songwriter. This poem says a lot, and you can feel the emotion dripping off the poem. Fantastic job! keep it up! :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

You need to hear it! Itsss aawwwweeessomme! Lol thanks

[Abbie]

okay *opens new tab and types in youtube* and your welcome.

[Abbie]

OMG! you were so right! this was awesome! XD

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol

[Crimson Bayonet]

Very dark. Very awesome. Very like amazing artwork! :D