I sit alone

I sit alone
all feeling gone

Ignorance is bliss
ignorance I miss

I made a mistake
my nerves made me make

freaking out
made her pout

I'm so sorry
but no more chances for Harley

no matter how many times I've asked
THAT was my last

I need rock and roll
to sooth my soul

so I sit alone
feeling gone

Author's Note

im a lone wolf in school. i simply cant stand or get along with the cool crowd and somehow all my classes are with that crowd. but its also about something happening in my life now aswell so yep. hope you enjoyed it. i know ive done alot better but i still like this one

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The title, flow and wording, left this in my mind.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tczU6OWoUkI

[olla]

man.. I know these feeling well.. good job.. I like this one too..

[Priscilla Sayers]

Ignorance is bliss until you reach an understanding that opens you up to second chances.... Revalations can be made through finding the source of you pain and facing it head on, with rational honest truth, from yourself... Dig deep my friend and I wish only hope to fill you and faith to guide you.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Sorry, Revelations:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

yeah. i dont really know what to say here. thanks? i mean your right. so thanks :D you too

[Priscilla Sayers]

Chin up. It was a great poem full of heart:) I love the honesty you share:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

well I've been taught its wrong to lie :D

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yes, it is:)

[Priscilla Sayers]

There is much bravery and honor in truth:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

yes your right. great minds think alike

[Admiral Kirk]

This is really touching... It's a powerful piece. I know the feeling... Then people try to be friendly but they get bored with me and forget me because I don't talk to them... Heh, anyway, awesome poem. :)

[The Analog Kid]

Ah, being a lone wolf will serve you well later in life even though right now it is very hard. The short form works well and I like how you still managed to insert the rock and roll.

[Harley (arbiter)]

that actually wasnt in it when i wrote it but long story short i had those two lines and a complete poem and said... why not lol

[The Analog Kid]

haha..just throw it in there for good measure!

[Harley (arbiter)]

thank you, everybody

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow. Excellent work Harley, it's very pure, straight from the heart. Nice job

[A. V. Madison]

The intensity of the short stanzas are unbelieveable perfect. And that second stanza was incredible. Sometimes you gotta cut loose and let your heart do the talking, and thats what you did. Its truthful, its raw, its wise~ its you. And its perfect. Rating 100/1000

[♪Barklight♪]

well, you know they might not be as bad if you talk to them... anywayz, good poem as always and keep up the good work ^_^

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow, I should say that this is a amazing poem.
Remarkable work!
100/100, as always ^_^