She Makes Me Cry

She Makes Me Cry

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
"

I guess I should be stronger

"
It's only been a week
feels like a lifetime
I miss the day
when I could call her mine
now all we talk is "hey"

"I may be your girl
but you ain't my guy"
I'd give her the world
She makes me cry

I fought so hard
for her heart
but it doesn't even matter
because I can live without her

but I don't see why
we can't be friends any-longer
She makes me cry
I guess I should get stronger
or die



© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
this was actually 3 unfinished poems put together. the very last line "or die" i just added while typing it to post :D i thought it could be a good closer maybe. you like it? should i leave it?

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the poetry is really good , good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. This is pretty...intense? I don't know what to call it, but it's all kinds of wonderful. Great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

thanks i wasnt expecting someone to call it intense.... then again we never know with you :D

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Added on August 25, 2012
Last Updated on August 25, 2012
Tags: cry, love, friendship, why, die, without, she, week, lifetime

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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