In your eyes

In your eyes

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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I am complete

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In your eyes, I am complete
In my eyes, you are so sweet

In your eyes
I see the feeling
I know its there
They show you love me
They show you care
And when I doubt it
I just have to stare
And I always see the glint
The little spark
Like stone and flint
From your heart

In your eyes, I am complete
In my eyes, you are so sweet

In my eyes
You are a godess
You are a queen
I think your pretty
You think I'm lying
If only you could see
What you are to me
If only you knew
How much you mean
I hope you know
Your my queen

© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


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A poem any girl would be happy to receive. by the way..I'm a Libra too :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

5 Years Ago

Then we should get along just fine, and thank you
AAAHHHHHH great job !!! stuff like this does not just get written cause it sounds good lol,... i can feel the real deal true love, soul mate, selfless devotion in the way you wrote this... how you feel this deep of love at 15 tells me that your prob not the average 15 year old huh? I to was a adult by 15 not by choice.. keep up the writing u got talent and i know for me growing up writing truly kept me sane many a time and wait till u are in your 30s and you go back and read some of the things u are writing now trust me keep it up ... great poem man ty

Posted 5 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

5 Years Ago

Thank you, you hit the nailhead.

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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