In your eyes...

In your eyes...

A Poem by Stef Outsiders

There is something in you're eyes
Something wrong
They tell a dark story
Maybe keep a secret
No use saying you can trust me
you've already made up your mind
There something in those eyes
You may think it is nothing
thought you cant hide it
No need to lie
at least tell me I' am right

There is something in you're eyes...

© 2011 Stef Outsiders


Author's Note

Stef Outsiders
Poof... Random again... lol

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Eyes are the window to the soul like they say.

Posted 11 Years Ago


loved it short but says lots

Posted 12 Years Ago


The eyes are the window to the soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ach, you are right. The eyes betray much, too much sometimes. But it is good that we can read it. It is the ones with dead eyes or cold eyes that are difficult as who knows what they are?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Eyes are the windows of the soul. Beautiful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thats bill. love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nicely written. I like it. Keep going......

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is Bold work. The look in these eyes scares me almost as much as what may be behind them. This work gives me chills.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting. Its not the type of poem I see normally. I like it. Its different. Eyes are truly the mirrors to the soul. They could betray your intentions and thoughts in a mere second. You portrayed this fact rather well when you written, "Something wrong. They tell a dark story." Each of us have a story to tell. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this poem! i relate to it...

maybe keepING a secret...

keep posting i love your style.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Stef Outsiders
Stef Outsiders

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Hi everyone I am writer but still have a long way to go, have been writing for four years now, i like to read, love art, photography drawing and designing! I'm 26 years old, have two beautiful ch.. more..

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