feelings

feelings

A Poem by unshakenScene
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depression

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Have you ever felt so alone like  no one in the world cares if your alive or died?
 Well thats how i feel like if i was just to walk out of this world 
no one would even care because all they care about is there god
damn selfs.

They dont even care to look twice in your dereaction. Every one around
 you just dont care about you or whats wrong?
If you have problems at home or are being made fun of.
Because all your life is drama,and lies and they dont 
want to be apart of it.

But yet they can run there mouth about something
thats not even true about you.
Like calling you a s**t because you sleped with one guy
when they sleeped with 20.

This is because they dont care about my feelings 
just about what there friends think about them.

© 2012 unshakenScene


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It sucks to feel like no one cares, but trust me, someone does. When people make up lies or talk about you, then let them. You only know the truth and the truth you don't have to bother explaining to anyone. They're putting you in the spotlight for awhile as they try to forget their own lives. It's a way of trying to prove themselves I guess...but no one knows you like you do...so whatever they might be saying about you, just let them run their mouths.

Posted 11 Years Ago


unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

i do or i try to
People only gossip to feel better about themselves and cover up their own fault. They smear up someone's reputation to make theirs look sparklingly clean. That's why you don't be friends with them, and when the opportunity presents itself... Slap 'en hard, right in their lying faces. Great poem. (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

thanks
This is why, i want you to know how much i love you and how much good I could do for you!!!! I would never let you feel this way and I would take care of you. Those god damn s***s can shut their mouths!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sad but true, I liked this because it is actually real and most people are liars and cheats. Few grammatical errors but I don't know if you did that for the effect of this writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

thanks

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im 16 & i dont give a damn about my bad reputation. I m bisexual and very proud. I am great to get along with:) im a sophermore at lima. sr high school. Im not a b***h unless you piss me off. I am gr.. more..

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