Longing

Longing

A Poem by unshakenScene
"

love

"

The way i feel about you is more then anyone can understand

you bring those butterflys to me and make want to fly

 

When you look at me i want to smile

I just wish that sosmeday i could call you mine

 

The times we had talked and you cared

have just all gone away and dissapered

 

There is no more love from you

that i can hold on too

 

but i still and always will feel for you

no matter what happens

 

The day you said goodbye i cried forever

i even lied a little

 

i know what i did was wrong

and i wish i could take it back

 

those things are all in the past now

i wish you could see that

 

I still love you and baby i always will

© 2013 unshakenScene


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i love this, its Romantic, Sweet, and most definitely titled properly. Excellent Job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


unshakenScene

6 Years Ago

thank you:)
So sad and bitter sweet. (: Excellent poem. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


unshakenScene

6 Years Ago

thanks

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unshakenScene
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lima, OH



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