Feels like forever New

Chapter of my personal life, October 19, 2007 My First true love for ten years and still going strong (since 1997) -Sofie Salvador

"She woke up with a smile on her face, it was a wonderful sunny Friday with full of love in her vision; as she turned around she noticed she hasn't worn her pink lingerie back either nothing at all but the soft silk sheets covering her body; she was exhausted from one steamy night that the pasta paid off. It still lingers on her mind; snapshots of every move they made, every turn and moan...  she decided to turn around and see her guy first thing in the morning.

He was still sleeping, she looked at him although she was only looking at his back without shirt on and half naked at the bed... her eyes were beginning to explore nearer and she saw scratches on his back... then she smiled like a fool. Everything again about last night came into her mind again, and then her body begins to feel aroused just the thought of it. She turned back to hold it back, but when she closed her eyes, she remember how he holds her hips doing it t the edge of the bed while she was in a sitting position facing him and looking him deeply in the eyes.
 

They did some conversation while making love...
BF: I love you...
GF: I love you more...
GF: they say..you'll only know your true love when you are about to die..
BF: and...
GF: Wish I could live and die everyday so that each day I die...You'll know your are my true love everyday....

The guy thrust harder, as her nails almost cut his back...but she released her hands and placed it  on the pillows where she
cannot hurt him that much from the pleasure she was having...

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She took her clothes under the bed and wear it piece by piece, it was past 9 in the morning and her hair was such a mess. She took her pink brush to comb her new cut hair. Then she sit beside the bed and stare at his gorgeous face while he was sleeping... after a few minutes he woke up and said "Why?" ... she replied "what" ... "Why you do that every morning, staring at me?! I want to go back to sleep!?" then she shook her head and said "Because it always felt good seeing your face  first thing in the morning".....

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Part of my love story (05-19-2007)
RLM 23 since 1997 ♥

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems & typo.

Reviews

[Mandi D K]

That's really beautiful, I could feel the tenderness and the way you recount things is beautifully. It was a little hard to follow with the grammar problems and spelling mistakes. You should definitely revise the story, it's so beautiful. It would kick some real a*s if you checked over it. Try reading it out loud and editing it, it will help with the flow of things.

I really , really the dialogue you have, especially "GF: Wish I could live and die everyday so that each day I die...You'll know your are my true love everyday...." I was sighing. That is so beautiful.

You're so very lucky. Keep up the great work Sofie and the City.

[Michael X]

Sensuous snapshot of affection
fully expressing-exposing soul
Accentuating moment of solace
remembering passions imbuing
And like dreams- feelings remain
alive and constant -such's fire
hearts burning with constant love
The flame of desirous intentions
Thank you for sharing

[Sofie and the City]

Thank you, I really appreciate it! I will revise it as soon as possible ☺