when the bucket will fill, the water will overflow...

when the bucket will fill, the water will overflow...

A Poem by vaishnavi

my life is like a bucket
it holds the water of tolerance
it was a magical pot to me
how much people pour into it 
it would never get full
but that magic of the pot got snatched away
now it cant hold anything
the water has come to its brim 
it cant do nothing except
overflowing
earlier so memories with the tears evaporate
but some remain like ocean
water is overflowing now
in the form of tears
i just want to cry
until my eyes gets dry
for all the bad memories 
that was caged inside me
i want to shout and cry
until my eyes gets dry
remove the burden from me 
and make me feel light
show the light of hope 
and make me walk towards right
but right now
let me cry until me eyes get dry

© 2014 vaishnavi


Author's Note

vaishnavi
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Like the imagery, well penned!

Posted 5 Years Ago


it's like my story...nice writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks for reading btw which is that story ?
I love this one! It's one of my favorites!

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

glad it is your fav thanks for reading
^_^
love the metaphor. great job writing this !:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks for this review i appreciate it :)
beautiful poem, gives a visual feel while reading it. excellent job. loved the last four lines, gave me that "wow" feel...

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

glad that you liked it :)
Most excellent poetry Vaish :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
Vidya Bacchus

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Vaish :)
its beautiful in very impressive way.everyone can relate too.welldone

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)
Your poem is true to your emotions but I don't like to glorify a situation where people have to constantly suffer without their mistakes.
Face your fears, fight them. Never do anything which you don't like or else you would start disliking yourself.
Be braver, be stronger and its a sin to be weak as your soul will take revenge on you if you go against it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

very true words spoken i really appreciate your review thanks for motivating me

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