Falling star

Falling star

A Poem by vaishnavi

sitting on a balcony ,
saw a star falling.
going and falling fast,
and remembering the days of past.
burning in the pain,
leaving behind the memories...
written with gold were remain.
too delicate to hold,
such bright and bold.
holding it close to your heart,
closing eyes and wish upon
and fulfilling it,it was forever gone
http://25.media.tumblr.com/0aa8a81901e8ba7f58f74463352816bf/tumblr_mrag04NrFP1solpq0o1_500.gif  - Vaishnavi G


© 2014 vaishnavi


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Short but meaningful poem. This seemed to talk about hope, a wish on a star. Great work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thank you :)
This seemed to hold so many different meanings. I really love poems that can be taken several different ways depending on who is reading the piece. Well done and great piece. Keep up the good work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks pure for such a wonderful review :)
Creativity at its level best. :) The imagery produced is awesome and the pictures you added adds to the poem's charm. :) Bless you VAishnavi. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks Priya for such a lovely review
priya

5 Years Ago

you are welcome Vaishnavi.. :)
Beautiful write as stary night. Great imaginary too. Lekin sahi hai falling fast and past.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

shukriya :)
i like it. it's very creative and can relate to anybody. nice write:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)
It has such simple thoughts that even a child can relate to it. This is so sweet. Very very attractive write,, ma'am :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)
very creative and amazing poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)
very -2 nice..........it connects and is beautifuly descriptive...............

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)
Very nice,descriptive piece Vaish.Well penned for sure :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thank u :)
Vidya Bacchus

5 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
ahh its more than Awesomeee I really like it n the creativity at its best. Wonderful

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks for that :)

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