Falling star

sitting on a balcony ,
saw a star falling.
going and falling fast,
and remembering the days of past.
burning in the pain,
leaving behind the memories...
written with gold were remain.
too delicate to hold,
such bright and bold.
holding it close to your heart,
closing eyes and wish upon
and fulfilling it,it was forever gone
  - Vaishnavi G

Reviews

[Mirra]

Short but meaningful poem. This seemed to talk about hope, a wish on a star. Great work.

[vaishnavi]

thank you :)

[Pure Innocence]

This seemed to hold so many different meanings. I really love poems that can be taken several different ways depending on who is reading the piece. Well done and great piece. Keep up the good work.

[vaishnavi]

thanks pure for such a wonderful review :)

[priya]

Creativity at its level best. :) The imagery produced is awesome and the pictures you added adds to the poem's charm. :) Bless you VAishnavi. :)

[vaishnavi]

thanks Priya for such a lovely review

[priya]

you are welcome Vaishnavi.. :)

[Saddam]

Beautiful write as stary night. Great imaginary too. Lekin sahi hai falling fast and past.

[vaishnavi]

shukriya :)

[Ranger Kessel]

i like it. it's very creative and can relate to anybody. nice write:)

[vaishnavi]

thanks a lot :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

It has such simple thoughts that even a child can relate to it. This is so sweet. Very very attractive write,, ma'am :D

[vaishnavi]

thanks a lot :)

[Happy hours]

very creative and amazing poem

[vaishnavi]

thanks a lot :)

[anne]

very -2 nice..........it connects and is beautifuly descriptive...............

[vaishnavi]

thanks a lot :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very nice,descriptive piece Vaish.Well penned for sure :)

[vaishnavi]

thank u :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Eve Ola]

ahh its more than Awesomeee I really like it n the creativity at its best. Wonderful

[vaishnavi]

thanks for that :)