Its better to be like Water .

Its better to be like Water .

A Poem by vaishnavi

As the water I would like to be
as gentle as nobody could see
gentle to every one
and molding as one could pour into
but as the water can bring disasters
and could break the hardest of the hard rock
it is the worst that one could see
but still like water I would like to be.
-by vaishnavi



© 2014 vaishnavi


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Very very observant of you to write a deep poem such as this. WOw.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Powerful yet peaceful, water can also prolong life and without it bring death.
Interesting peace and perspective.
Well done. ^^

Posted 5 Years Ago


i remember Bruce Lee saying, " Be like Water"...that is flexible enough to take any shape...u can b hard n gentle at the same time...you are right u r intelligent...water as a source gives life but at the same time it bring disasters...nicely written..:)

Raj

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

very correct ant that is what i have mentioned here....
thn 4 that
water deceiving gentle power


Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

. ^_^
nicely expressed feeling with water as a parameter...very good write :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks... :)
'this one is really beautiful. i like the way you express both sides n ended up by saying I would like to be water

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

i have mentioned both views and counter views as the coin has always 2 sides....
thanks for li.. read more
I love the wording! Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks, i will....
bringing both the factors at the same time is nice.........

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

of course it is ....

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Added on July 18, 2014
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