I wish the destiny could tell us what it want...

I wish the destiny could tell us what it want...

A Poem by vaishnavi

I wish the destiny could tell us
what it wants from us
so that everything would be clear to us
what we want is sometimes fulfilled
but what destiny wants from us
how to tell what is fulfilled ?
but still sometimes i think it was better
that we know what destiny wants from me
the thing which i want to forget
is made me remembered by the destiny again
and what i want to get is served by pain
so i wish the destiny could tell what it wants from me again

© 2014 vaishnavi


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Destiny is nothing but how one perceives the life.
Its our outlook that can embellish it or demoralize it.

By the way, great work !!!
Keep it up !!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

hmm... true said
but still we name it destiny :P
Destiny has a way of telling us in it's own ways. We just have to be keen observers. A great write Vashnavi.Looking forward to more.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks divya for this lovely review
a question we all ask..i wish we all could get it answers..but as its said..what u get is ur destiny..if u lik it love it, if u dont like it..thn work on it so that u can move...pain is like a gift u will get it..but just keep on writing bcoz all our answers are lying within..thanks for the wonderful write up..

Raj

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

Very true words indeed.......agree totally.
thanks for that :)
nice piece of writing...keep it up :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks for that...
I love the thought behind these words. Well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks eve
Love the opening line!! Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Everything that happen in our life always have some reason...in case it bring pain we would desire if we can know what is going to happen afterwards so that we can resolve it.......but if puts a very big question mark......few things should be like let them go attitude to come out of it........I like the idea since many passes through same stage........

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

very true words Anne
thanks for reviewing

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