Why Do Fools Fall In Love?

Why Do Fools Fall In Love?

A Poem by Valendette

Falling In Love…

Is an outdated act

 

Supported by the fact

that ignorant old men

and women on a whim

 

Want to handcuff their heart

 

to the same old fart

 

For one long forever

 

Years and years of never

 

Hearing the words

 

I love you.

 

© 2012 Valendette


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Dark and satirical, almost sounds like the words of someone who grew up bitter and alone, or someone who once was in love and then the other person ended up not being all they promised at the alter. Really well written, thanks for the read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a really good. Unique in it's own special beautiful way. I LOVE it. Keep writing!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago




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Added on January 19, 2012
Last Updated on February 24, 2012
Tags: love, fake, old, outdated, ignorant, handcuff, none, alone, hate, single, falling, forever, stupid, overrated, untrue

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Valendette
Valendette

greencastle, IN



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