Poetic Curry

Poetic Curry

A Poem by VALORMORE DE PLUME
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A Prose about Poetry an attempt at Blank Verse with Varied Feet

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Poetic Curry

A blend of flavors

A Prose about Poetry

By

Valormore

 

 the palette enraptured with self-awareness,

 the volume of the concert shapes a forested landscape,

 of briers and crabapple,

 from afar,

 the song of the birds is alluringly festive,

the unseen rivers babble over rocky beds,

 the fauna flourish on hidden low well-traveled trails,

 scented with markers by previous pilgrim’s passage,

 adorned with fall’s variegated foliage,

 the harmony of nature’s community is resplendent,

 and yet,

 those who seek to venture into the heart of this dense thicket find,

 each flora is armed for battle,

 resisting intrusion,

 guarding natures secret dance,

 the animals too,

 do snarl and growl over sharing their hiding places,

 we seek only to witness,

 the individual instruments playing in this symphony,

 the unwary traveler is torn to the bone,

 ill prepared for this home,

 finding the way is foreboding,

 painful,

 and bloody,

 after examining each citrus segment,

 having squeezed out the last drop,

 we are left with Humpty-Dumpty,

 torn asunder,

 the scattered pieces now become a trail of tears,

 for the magical wonder lost,

 where once was an enchanted forest,   

 

© 2014 VALORMORE DE PLUME


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Beautiful well-aesthetically-detailed poem describing a forest, this poem deserve to be published .. Alas, most poet when their description go aesthetic, they either drift away or lose the pace, but to keep the details at the same pace, music, and scene is what makes a great poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you Khaled, your review lifts my weary spirit.



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the times places who what when where of life itself mixed with the emotions they exude well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you Tate, your comments are always welcome.
Tate Morgan

6 Years Ago

you are welcome I have been absent a while trying to get back to normal
This is interesting. I enjoyed the imagery and easy cadence.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you Quirklet for sharing your impression. Your enjoyment, is a strum on the strings of my bein.. read more
It's a thought provoking piece, Sir VDP. Very deep. How does poetry changed people? I'm struck with the metaphors used in this one. Amazing!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful well-aesthetically-detailed poem describing a forest, this poem deserve to be published .. Alas, most poet when their description go aesthetic, they either drift away or lose the pace, but to keep the details at the same pace, music, and scene is what makes a great poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you Khaled, your review lifts my weary spirit.
Splendidly interesting. Nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you for commenting Brittany. It is nice to meet you. Welcome to my Word Gardens.
Lots of deep flavor in your words, nicely pen'd....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you my lovely friend, your comment puts a warm smile on my face. May your days be filled with .. read more
"the harmony of nature’s community is resplendent,

and yet,

those who seek to venture into the heart of this dense thicket find,

each flora is armed for battle,

resisting intrusion,

guarding natures secret dance,

the animals too,

do snarl and growl over sharing their hiding places,"

I like this unique form and the self awareness of the narrator when it comes to nature and its inhabitants and how encroachement of humans will come with a price to pay. I have enjoyed your enchanted forest...:............


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. Your encouragement ads a sparkle to my eye.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

My pleasure ...Any time...:).................
delicious, may i have seconds?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. This is a product of trying to expand my poetic licence. Recently, the phrase b.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

too many empty qualifiers? not at all.
VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob,
Interesting writing :)

Enjoyed it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sasha, you bring a friendly smile to my face.
Sasha

6 Years Ago

your welcome :)

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