We Two Are One

We Two Are One

A Poem by VALORMORE DE PLUME
"

Destined to be together.

"

We Two Are One


A Poem

By


Valormore


 

The sweet honeyed ambiance of your love,


washes over the rocks of my soul,


not unlike a tidal wave,


caressing far inland.


I am submerged in you,


Incessantly I am jubilant.


I venture to possess you.


Yet I cannot hold you.


Take portions of me,


into the depths of you.


I absorb shares of you,


into my hallowed ground.


Eternally shall we intermingle,


Cavorting to the rhythm of life.


We are bonded at our fringes.


Though we two make one.

 

 

by


Valormore De Plume

  

 

 

 

© 2014 VALORMORE DE PLUME


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It's not always about using big words and sounding smart. Try to ketch the attention and have some sort of "rhythm to your reason".
Thanks for writing though it was still a good way to express your self.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting Ganja Witch. I understand and agree that meter and simplicity h.. read more
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B.J
Such well written work making us think. I know I did and re-read it. Words linked together as we read, beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

You are so kind, to express your view. I thank you sincerely. Welcome to the Word Gardens of Valormo.. read more
B.J

6 Years Ago

They do my friend
This one is right from your heart and every word is felt... Good read

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

As with one other review, I believe I wrote a response, however it is not here now. Thank you my fri.. read more
A. Amos

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome buddy
"We are bonded at our fringes..." I don't know why I like that phrase, but I do...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

I am happy you came to visit. I responded to your comment, straight away, or so I thought. Therefore.. read more
"bonded at our fringes"

yes, the idea of two becoming one, yet neither losing his or her identity...

love can not control, it can only be expressed freely.

that is the real bond.

really like your wording here.

jacob

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, you are so kind.
Marie

6 Years Ago

Jacob, I notied that phrase even before I saw your review.
This is a beautiful depiction of a binary synergy:

Synergy

Two or more may form a One
from a void that once was None.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the visit. Good to see you again.
Wow. I thought Valentines is over. But this is the defenition of timeless romance...:)...............

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. your comments are gracious.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................

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Added on February 17, 2014
Last Updated on February 17, 2014
Tags: Endless Love, Oneness, destiny

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VALORMORE DE PLUME
VALORMORE DE PLUME

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Welcome to, "The Mindscapes of Valormore" I hope my stories produce pictures in your mind. That is what a mindscape is. A place you can go repe.. more..

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