More than a Billion ways to die

More than a Billion ways to die

A Poem by vampireemochick
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you could die of the most stupitedest things

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Ther are more than a million ways to die

you could die of old age or of a sickness

you could die of not eating

everywere you go you have a possiblity of dieing

you can die in a earthquake

you could die from a terrorest attak

at any sec. you could die.

treat ever min, no ever sec like its your last

because you will never know when its your last breath

you can die of triping over rock and stumble down a hill

take my advice seireously

 for i have lost a close friend

and i was rude to her the last time i saw her

but in the end we all die,

unless your a vampireXD

© 2011 vampireemochick


Author's Note

vampireemochick
i know there are missed spelled and other errors, just tell me how you like it, was the idea good plz answer the quesion below

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The idea was good - unique. You need to watch you spelling though - as you said. Anyway it reminded of someone that i treated like a brother. He died.

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i like vampires, loves stores, horror movies, choclet, books, plays, and i love shopping at hottopic. i wear a lot of black but im not weird like goth. im more scene or emoish, but i dont cut myshelf. more..

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