When you are there

An unrequited love ---- Someone special who never knew how love someone do and ready to sacrifice everything just to keep her happy

When you're there
My day becomes night
Thoughts seem to a lost way
But the heart says stay quiet

When you care
It feels
Like an aroma in the air
When you share
It feels
Like I am someone rare

When you're there
Everything feels so special to me

You are tear behind my every smile
At times a river,
At times thirsty poem in every rhyme
You're in my heart, as a worry
I do everything wrong,
When want to meet you in hurry

When you're there
There is a fragrance of emotions
I see everything
Like a beautiful love pair

When you are there
My every poem recites
Like a holy layer

Author's Note

Hope you like my new lyrical poem and yes a special thanks to Just Kim who actually gave me few idea with her poems.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I'm not a fan of love poems becuz they often sound so similar -- no originality -- and that's why I love this love poem. Your expressions are fresh & rich & memorable: "When you care it feels like an aroma in the air" . . . "thirsty poem in every rhyme" . . . love the way you bring in all the senses & your word choices sound soft & buoyant, just like the message you impart (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Vari]

I liked your every review friend! This was also what I expect from you. Thank you for reading this.

[Ang-X]

This is so wonderful, I enjoyed this write. Inspiration from another individual can be inspiring as well. SO nicely written and expressed

[Nishi]

The way you hve expressed the feeling about love is just fabulous and really heart warming.
Glad to read your poem :)
keep it up!

[Vari]

Ty Nishi Pleasure to see you liked my poem :)

[Fran Marie]

When you are there
My every poem recites
Like a holy layer

I so like these ending
lines the entire poem
is filled with deep emotions
spilling forth..

really nice work here
I enjoyed;

[Vari]

Ty Marie Loved your feedback.

[Dreamer Sima]

As you perfectly wrote "like I am someone rare"... It's the base feel when someone is in love. All a lover want is a special place in the heart of that special one
Nice read I must say...

[Vari]

Ty Sima.... :)

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Dear vari, your lines are filled with romantic thoughts. I note that you have been inspired by Kim's poetry. I think it is wonderful that poets on WC can be inspired by the writings of other like minded souls. First if yours I have read.

Chris

[Vari]

Ty Chris and I love to acknowledge other's work and that's nothing more or less your social personality I build in myself and the culture I've came from. Glad to read your review.

[Glory Vosotros]

Love is in the air... Keep loving. :D

[Vari]

Ty Vostros!

[Lydia Shutter]

Very romantic.....reads like a Valentine! Lovely. Lydi*

[Vari]

Ty Lydi. Glad to see you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is so good.
"When you are there
My every poem recites
Like a holy layer"
I loved the complete poem and the above lines. My favorite. Thank you Vari for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Vari]

Ty Coyote for reading this and your words are inspirational.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure. This is poetry my new friend and you are welcome.

[Levi Levin]

Very good poem indeed. It tells a story that is familiar to many of us:)

[Vari]

Yes, Levi thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day ahead.

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome.