Pantoum

Pantoum

A Poem by vincentbals

Here I am, waiting for my dreams to come true

All I want is them to be starring only you

I want to hold you, bring you to reality

You are the one that guides me through cruelty.

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All I want is them to be starring only you

Those dreams will be my wake up calls, proving

You are the one that guides me through cruelty.

Currently and somehow in the past and all the days from now

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Those dreams will be my wake up calls, proving

Whenever you’re around, I’ll be able to smile

Currently and somehow in the past and all the days from now

I hope your love will shine down and leave a golden trace.

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Whenever you’re around, I’ll be able to smile

Here I am, waiting for my dreams to come true

I hope your love will shine down on me and leave a golden trace

I want to hold you, bring you to reality

© 2010 vincentbals


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This was good. I love it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


i love it! well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is lovely, touching..first stanza was a great opening, really pulled the reader into your mind set..well penned

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is such a good poem. i liked it a lot

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is one of the more interesting and creative writes I have seen. Honestly I read this three times before I picked up the pattern you used in writing this. Very impressive and creative.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Really nice and sweet poem. The desire of love is sometimes stronger than love itself. Your poem is written as if it was floating around. Loked it a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautifully written. One verse caught my eye more than the others;

"I hope your love will shine down on me and leave a golden trace"

So amazingly written i found myself breathless and overwhelmed by the words. Truly, truly amazing. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice poem :)



Posted 11 Years Ago


no love so great as one whose reality eclipses even our dreams...
Very nice...

Posted 11 Years Ago


100/100 great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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