Pantoum

Here I am, waiting for my dreams to come true

All I want is them to be starring only you

I want to hold you, bring you to reality

You are the one that guides me through cruelty.

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All I want is them to be starring only you

Those dreams will be my wake up calls, proving

You are the one that guides me through cruelty.

Currently and somehow in the past and all the days from now

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Those dreams will be my wake up calls, proving

Whenever you’re around, I’ll be able to smile

Currently and somehow in the past and all the days from now

I hope your love will shine down and leave a golden trace.

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Whenever you’re around, I’ll be able to smile

Here I am, waiting for my dreams to come true

I hope your love will shine down on me and leave a golden trace

I want to hold you, bring you to reality

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

bring me to reality... oh so nice... all of it ... the golden trace of a dream, of a longing for love... well done.
~♥~

[Coyote Poetry]

The flow and story is outstanding. The poem told of a desire of love. I like the complete poem. The last lines were strong and powerful. Sometime we need to make dreams come true. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Adelia Alighieri]

The rhyme is so simple and fluent, I felt like singing it. Very good, I enjoyed it a lot.

[loowzerX]

agreed, sweet :)

[Cynthia]

Nice written!!!!
This is sweet.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

reads like a song~ sweet and loving write~ there are people in our lives who do very much feel like life preservers hovering near us at the exact moment we need them for the exact thing we need them for~

[Needy]

I like this. Its nicely written :)