This

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A Poem by Victoria

Let the lightning follow me to my grave.
The thunder signal your arrival.

This is it. My last moment of mine.

From now on it's me and you.
Not me. Not you.
But forever intertwined in bittersweet romance.

Let's melt and freeze together.
Hope and pray.

I'm not me anymore; I'm you.
You're not you anymore; you're me.

So goodbye emptiness and lonesome thoughts.
Have fun, in your mindless rainstorm.

It can only get better
and better
and better.

I'll only look back for a moment.

© 2011 Victoria


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Magical realist imagery. I loved it! Punctuation has its style. Good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 18, 2011
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Tags: moment, thunder, lightning

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Victoria
Victoria

Fords, NJ



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