The Abandoned

The Abandoned

A Poem by Vanessa P

Flower field abandoned by the rain
Feeling empty and dry
Rail tracks with no train
Still and quiet like the blue sky

A disappointment you can't erase
A secret life that left a trace

This mixed up jar of emotions
Waiting to explode at any moment
Enough to cause a commotion
Just to fuel your enjoyment

Why couldn't you be brave?
I was the soul you needed to save

© 2014 Vanessa P

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oh.. This left me speechless. especially the last line. i can really relate to it. even though the whole poem is mind blowing, my fav line is "a secret life that left a trace" it is so touchy, sad, painful yet beautiful and silent. I really loved it Vanessa. Amazing work.

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Added on February 1, 2014
Last Updated on February 23, 2014


Vanessa P
Vanessa P

Heights, NY

I'd like to consider myself an honest poet. I write what comes to me. I write based on personal experiences and/or feelings and also some personal beliefs. I appreciate all feedbacks/cricism. .. more..

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