Butterflies

Butterflies

A Poem by Victoria

I wish I'd known you
in another life
like if maybe
we were butterflies
and all these things
like love and sadness
didn't matter and
we could just spread
our wings and fly
towards the sun
until we burned
to pieces

© 2013 Victoria


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Well... butterflies have short lives to begin with... and the metamorphosis... but I do like the idea of this piece... I believe you want to express the carefree nature of butterflies... with this short narrative...

Posted 10 Years Ago


This reminds me of a fleeting daydream. I like daydreams, heh. A lovely write

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victoria

10 Years Ago

thank you! :)
L.M.Warde

10 Years Ago

Absolutely Anytime, I look forward to reading more from you!

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Added on July 30, 2013
Last Updated on July 30, 2013
Tags: poetry, poem, melancholy, sadness, romance, love, heartbreak

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Victoria
Victoria

Australia



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