Poetic trash writing ideas.

pick one for me to continue working on?

nothing is beautiful. everything can become nothing

within a blink of an eye. The site of somthing truely beautiful

can make a grown man cry. Even tho tears are the truest form of emotion,

Some emothions shouldnt define us. Because with and without them

We are still all beautful nothings.

 

 

why so serious. lemme put that

smile on your face. baby you know it doesnt matter to me.

You could pick any place. just me and you

thats what its sposed to be. But f**k

your too busy choosen those jokes over me.

you know i want you but i wont drop the universe,

even tho in my eyes you hold the world.

 

 

 

try and pull me down.

man your a joke friom the sound.

just one chance your face i shall

pound-you into fine white powder.

line you up and snort you like blow.

cant handle the cold. f**k head

your way too deep in the snow.

 

 

Higher than yall. The cleanest site you ever saw.

Beaten down but n***a still im walkin tall.

You will rise and fall. n***a

know i stay higher than yall.

 

 

Author's Note

pick one for me to continue writing please?

Reviews

[Solitary Dreamer]

I'm sorry but I like pretty much all of them but y so much cussin'?:(

[Matt]

ok imm just gunna work on allll of them ^^

[Fantasia Allmighty]

the higher than ya'll one.

[RonnieBreight]

I like the one about the beautiful nothings. It's bitter sweet, and soft but depressing. It's also very pretty, and flows nicely. I would love to hear more of it if you were to continue. :).

[Rain Kissed Secret]

First or second would be good. ^-^

[nono]

Higher than y'all
This was really violent! lol I like it though I think it's interesting a different kind of writing style. And I think that's needed in the writing world, because people are harsh when it's not that old fashioned 16th century writing way! lol I like it though can't wait to read your next one!

[Jennika has a short att..]

Hmmm, I dunno, they all sound like they could be good if you put it some time, but I think I'd rather read either the first one or the third one :D