My Forever Knight

Knowing you belong with someone and they are all the things you would ever need

          My Forever Knight
Free me oh brave knight,
With the shiniest of swords,
Cut down my enemies with a swipe of your blade,
And with barely a word steal me away,
Upon your swiftest steed,
Away with me you ride.

 

Write me a verse sweet poet,
Say words to me that will never belong to another,
Bring tears to my eyes and kiss them away,
Bury me within your scented embrace,
Like the calmest of seas ,
Let me dance on your shore.

 

Build me a home dear lover,
Where our children's laughter,
Rival that of the greatest symphonies,
Nod your head contentedly ,
With a smile on your face,
As you let  me talk forever about everything and nothing.

 

Now you my brave knight,
Who recites prose and built me a home,
I bask in your reality,
Never worried that your love will falter,
Never happier than in your arms,
Never complete when you are not here.

                                 by vidya

Author's Note

Something different don't know if it is any good so please let me know.

Reviews

[magenta24uk]

I think this seems to show an underlying need to be rescued by our love and kept safe. We all need to feel that love and to Hero worship our chosen partner is no bad thing as long as we except their faults as well. In poetry we can forget the faults and live the fantasy. Nice.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you very much:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Now you my brave knight,
Who recites prose and built me a home,
I bask in your reality,
Never worried that your love will falter,
Never happier than in your arms,
Never complete when you are not here."

This was sooo good and lovely with very nice imagery...Bravo........................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww thank you so much sami your words as usual mean a lot!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).................

[Veronica DiMarco]

Knights in shining armor... do they ever exist?

My Forever Knight
Free me oh brave knight,
With the shiniest of swords,
Cut down my enemies with a swipe of your blade,
And with barely a word steal me away,
Upon your swiftest steed,
Away with me you ride.
-love this part

great imagery, keep it up! ;]

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you for your kind words and I prefer to believe that they do exist:)

[Veronica DiMarco]

I will hold on to your word for that..;]

[Vidya Bacchus]

You do that :)

[Chris Rampersad]

I was wonderin when you woulda write ah poem for you husband. lol. I goin and show im it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You had better not lol