Angry

Angry

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

When you run out of excuses.

"

                  ANGRY

 

I made excuses for you at every turn,

And polished and pasted,

To make your sins seem less than,

The monumental treachery that they were.

 

I am so angry,

That you keep proving to me,

Just what you really are,

And I have run out of excuses.

 

It is amazing that you cannot see,

The way you tear me apart,

The way I still yearn to be near you,

Even bleeding and broken beyond repair.

 

To you I am the unreasonable one,

And you have erred not at all,

I am screaming so loud because I need you to understand,

That I have no justification for you.

  

And I give up,

You will never change into the you,

That I believed you were,

And I have run out of reasons to remain at your side.

© 2014 Vidya Bacchus


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Vidya Bacchus
Still just thinking.

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Thanks for sharing Vidya.
I enjoy reading powerful poems like this.

This is my favourite stanza........

"I made excuses for you at every turn,

And polished and pasted,

To make your sins seem less than,

The monumental treachery that they were."

Sometimes we get so disappointed in people we love and trust.
To a point where even the excuses we make for them do not make sense anymore.

I know your situation Vidya

Thanks again for sharing this beautiful piece




Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mbuyisa .Your words are the very truth :)



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this is potent...we just can't excuse someone into being what we hope they are...
the longer we are with them, we find out what's under the surface...and so often it is disappointing.

a very moving write...a one-sided love...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob for your always kind and encouraging words that mean so much :)
Thanks for sharing Vidya.
I enjoy reading powerful poems like this.

This is my favourite stanza........

"I made excuses for you at every turn,

And polished and pasted,

To make your sins seem less than,

The monumental treachery that they were."

Sometimes we get so disappointed in people we love and trust.
To a point where even the excuses we make for them do not make sense anymore.

I know your situation Vidya

Thanks again for sharing this beautiful piece




Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mbuyisa .Your words are the very truth :)
A dramatic and powerful piece. When thoughts come from a place of passion, sorrow, etc., they shine brightly, even if that shines a light on times of sadness. What an amazing write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kit Kat,Yes the sadder we are the better our poetry ,sucks that it does lol
Wow this is how I felt a few hours ago! Amazing job my dear friend:))))))))))))))))))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Aww glad to see you don't feel like this anymore. Thank you Jon :)
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9 Years Ago

Yes its is awesome to feel great:) I couldn't do it without great friends here and awesome writes to.. read more
Someone got fed up and faced the truth. The anger is a good thing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Yes someone did. It was bound to happen sooner or later.Thank you Marie :)
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No one should do that to anyone. This is a sad but true poem for some. Great write Vidya.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you buddy. Very true words :)
Damn. You have rendered me speechless. The words you have written here just reached into my soul. Very real, very emotional speaking of the intense agony and pain. The one you want to heal you is the one who is slowly breaking you. I'm going through something very similar. Sister in a parallel universe, perhaps? xo :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Perhaps we are and that would be a compliment my friend.Thank you very much :)
A write that speaks of intense agony. very emotive and spoke directly to me . simple yet touching narration.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Hey Anand thank you very much.I hope you are good :)
Anand Sehgal

9 Years Ago

doing okay dear :) how are you doing?
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

I am great, nice to hear you are good.Keep on keeping on my friend :)

This is beautiful and lovely wrote, many will relate with your work


Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much AA.Always glad for your kind words :)
An excellent, very powerful poem Vidya; I sure hope things improve for you; it's always a shock when you think you know someone, and it turns out you were wrong.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You have 9 lives stick?
Michael Stevens

9 Years Ago

Yep, you can't keep a good stick down; err--wait...
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Umm yes they have drugs for that now lol

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