In a line

For "In a Line" contest. This is my first piece of writing since I step into wristerscafe.

Watching my foot stepping out this door, into the room where I will find another door to open.

Reviews

[SuperChick62]

I like the idea behind this line. It's very hopeful and poetic. The structure is pretty good, too. I always like to try and make a suggestion in all of my reviews, and for you I was wondering if you could condense it more. "Watching my foot stepping out this door, only to find another," or "where I will find another," or "into a room with yet another." I like the first suggestion the best, but you get my idea. Very good, I enjoyed it a lot.

[Vine_spinner]

Thank you for your kind comments. Wish to learn more from you in the future!

[Archia]

I think this is a very appropriate first piece of writing. I really enjoyed the meaning that was in it. I wish you luck on your Writerscafe journey, and welcome.

[Vine_spinner]

Thank you!