Why Juliet Left Romeo

Why Juliet Left Romeo

A Poem by heartsinice
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Classical Love Story from a creators perspective.

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The story seemed so perfect, untouchable by any circumstance
Two doves in love, both traveled far & wide to be with each other
Through treacherous traps and obscure distractions hope was found
Unaware tragedy and dismay was conceived  
Attraction along with his sister affection were sometimes not acknowledged 
Still clueless as to why Juliet left Romeo
The truth is very conservative but needs to be exposed 
Otherwise rumors shall grow into reality 
Her attitude had such a stench, rotten aroma 
Romeo will overcome this difficult stage, so he thinks
Trying desperately to salvage what remains of this bond
So time is seized in this hour of confusion 
We then finally learn the truth of this dismantle
For Shakespeare's  imagination has ran off with another woman
With what justified reason, that remains to be unsolved 
In this moment Juliet's motive in her decision is revealed 
No longer shall the question be asked 
Why Juliet left Romeo.

© 2018 heartsinice


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I like this creator's prospective... you made an answer through your poem of a question from a tale beyond famous.... at least you're not the one who is just saying that love doesn't works just like between romeo and juliet it didn't....you're goin' good in a great way! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment ! I appreciate it , I just felt that angle was never experimented with.
Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Years Ago

You're heartedly welcome :))



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Lol it is what it is- sometimes just not meant to be- rather leave than live a lie- well written🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

2 Years Ago

Very true lol , thanks for the review!
I like this creator's prospective... you made an answer through your poem of a question from a tale beyond famous.... at least you're not the one who is just saying that love doesn't works just like between romeo and juliet it didn't....you're goin' good in a great way! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment ! I appreciate it , I just felt that angle was never experimented with.
Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Years Ago

You're heartedly welcome :))
What a beautiful write-up

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

2 Years Ago

Thank You !!

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Added on August 13, 2018
Last Updated on August 13, 2018
Tags: Romeo, Juliet, Shakespeare, Poem, Love, Imagination

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heartsinice
heartsinice

moreno valley, CA



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