Mahogany Queen

Mahogany Queen

A Poem by heartsinice
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A description of royalty!

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To my mahogany queen so rare and special
Your skin releases the scent of sweet coco butter
Smile,beautiful as the tropical flowers in  Brazil
My Mahogany Queen 
Who's eyes shine like the clear drops from a waterfall
You're heart and will as strong as the mighty redwood
To others your love is calculus, to me its simply basic
My Mahogany Queen 
Hair natural as the soil on the earth 
Lips more radiant than the falling sunset
You're soul which is more pure than blue flames
My Mahogany Queen 
The color mahogany is such an astonishing color
It's so full of wonder and beauty
Made with perfection and grace
My Mahogany Queen

© 2018 heartsinice


Author's Note

heartsinice
All women are queens, I just had to show love to one specifically for the culture.

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My my! I must say I never read such dazzling appreciation for woman till now in so just lines.....I appreciate your respect towards women....thanks for sharing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

1 Year Ago

Youre welcome! Glad you enjoyed the poem :)
Hi vinny.

The imagery in your poem is ample and lush.
It reads rich with adoration.
But I notice a distinct change in the last four lines: they almost feel a little out of place in relation to your preceding lines.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the feed back, i agree after disecting it a little more. It losses it's boldness in those.. read more

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Added on August 14, 2018
Last Updated on August 14, 2018
Tags: Queen, Royalty, Poem, Love, Melanin

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heartsinice
heartsinice

moreno valley, CA



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