Mahogany Queen

A description of royalty!

To my mahogany queen so rare and special

Your skin releases the scent of sweet coco butter

Smile,beautiful as the tropical flowers in  Brazil

My Mahogany Queen 

Who's eyes shine like the clear drops from a waterfall

You're heart and will as strong as the mighty redwood

To others your love is calculus, to me its simply basic

My Mahogany Queen 

Hair natural as the soil on the earth 

Lips more radiant than the falling sunset

You're soul which is more pure than blue flames

My Mahogany Queen 

The color mahogany is such an astonishing color

It's so full of wonder and beauty

Made with perfection and grace

My Mahogany Queen

Author's Note

All women are queens, I just had to show love to one specifically for the culture.

Reviews

[¿]

My my! I must say I never read such dazzling appreciation for woman till now in so just lines.....I appreciate your respect towards women....thanks for sharing :)

[heartsinice]

Youre welcome! Glad you enjoyed the poem :)

[charlie]

Hi vinny.

The imagery in your poem is ample and lush.
It reads rich with adoration.
But I notice a distinct change in the last four lines: they almost feel a little out of place in relation to your preceding lines.

[heartsinice]

Thanks for the feed back, i agree after disecting it a little more. It losses it's boldness in those lines. Ill make the adjustment soon ! Appreciate the honesty