My Last Day On Earth

My Last Day On Earth

A Poem by Vinod Kumar U K
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The formation of living kinds starts from a huge flood and the end is also will be a flood

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Water uprising

Up on the banks plains valleys

And the mountain top

Where I go

 

Rain rain everywhere

Termoil Tsunami Strom

Melting ice mountains

Where I go

 

Falling down the trees

Of concrete and

Collapsed pyramids

Where I go

 

Endless rotation

Weakened the foots

Mom stopped everything

Where I go.

© 2011 Vinod Kumar U K


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Really Lovely writing!
I like whole poem.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vivid images can come with such simple words, and you did an amazing job at demonstrating that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very interesting read,

But I failed to grasp the meaning your last four lines...

Endless rotation
Weakened the foots
Mom stopped everything
Where I go.

I would really like to hear from you on that... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely written, and I like the mental images that it put in my head. I like the image too :) Keep writing, you're good at it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Splendid lush imagery, I like that :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a really interesting write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is very deep, what inspired u?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! Wonderfully written. Well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Grammatical error: line 4: *Where

Same on line 15 in stanza 4: *stopped

Interesting poem. I love mythology. The flood story never gets old. They only major mythology without a flood story that I know of is Norse Mythology. They end the world with fire; Ragnorak.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice! I can see it now!


Posted 9 Years Ago



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