Water In the MOON

All the lovers deeply attached with the moom, the cooly sensation and sentiments..

Dear Moon

In the lonley sleepless night

You are with me

Sharing my dense silence

 

You Filled and coloured

Her cheeks beauty

With the shining nights

Walking miles to sand

 

We only share with you

For the millions of years

Our Joy, Romance, Agony

And tiredness

 

But We never thought

While digging your heart

For find out the water

Our tears match.

 

 

Author's Note

Moon impact.. Millions of lovers shares their love with there loved ones with the beautiful moon, but now badly demolished their imagination,

Reviews

[Muse]

I watched this event closely. I don't think it was to just find water....I don't even think this mission had good intentions. But it bothered me just how many people did not even know about this! I loved the inspiration behind this poem...WELL DONE! xo

[Marie Harrison]

Very interesting concept.
This is new to me
but I love your poem.
I love this journey
you take us on
of walking in the sand
with the moo. Lovely poem!

[WindSong]

I LOVE the way you start the poem with, "Dear Moon". The moment I read those words I fell in love it! It is a very beautiful poem, indeed! Your words are like feathers lightly stroking the depths of the soul!

WindSong

[Sheila Kline]

Your last verse expertly sums up how much power the moon may have on our emotions, and how we consider it to be our friend!
I also like the way your joined humanity, and love with the moon. I can close my eyes and see one talking to the man in the moon about his love, and the joy and romance, but being also troubled with agony and tiredness at times.
A nice write!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such awesome writing, love it :)

[Phibby Venable]

it has a lovely movement and the lover recognizes the varying effects
of the moon.
You Filled and coloured

Her cheeks beauty

With the shining nights

Walking miles to sand


love these lines.

[nostal]

very much a calming, gentle piece. Love the last stanza.

[Tai Ryens]

Lovely, Amazing, Beautifully written poem. Deep, and I like the last 4 lines.

[STAR CHILD]

this is such a lovely poem i love it

[sarah]

The moon is something I have always tried to write about but could never find the words. I don't think you had that problem, great write! Beautiful write!

[KAREN]

Very beautiful write! The moon is romantic for two lovers, but the ending gives a sense of sadness as if the love didn't make and you and the moon share tears.