A Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Trees are green or leaves are green?


Trees are Green

Why leaves are Green

Oh! No you are wrong


Trees are Black

Brown Yellow Pink

Rose White

Grey and Ivory


The shivering winter

No leaves on the tree

Only Christmas Green

Tree for Almighty...Amen.

© 2011 Vinod Kumar U K

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I like the way your poem could be talking about trees & also it could symbolize diversity within the human form, celebrating people of many colors. I am a person who likes to find more interesting "color" words, going beyond the primary colors like "green" . . . try "verdant" or "jade" or "olive" . . . similarly "black" doesn't show us anything new or original . . . try "ebony" or "midnight". Using basic color words makes this message feel elementary and/or simplistic. It feels like you have great imagery to share, but you could do more to fall in love with all the different words that can be used (thesaurus is a favorite tool of mine) . . . Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago

Very well expressed... thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago

this is good Mr. Vino

Posted 11 Years Ago

May Christmas bring all of us peace and happiness!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like your fancy for trees. This is one of your best writes so far, I really enjoyed this!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Trees are so much more than most men can appreciate. They are our source of air. They live because of the water, another important resource that we take for granted and contaminate. Trees and water keep man alive. I don't like cutting down any live tree, even when it is to celebrate the birth of Jesus. I do like your poem, however, because it celebrates "the tree."

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on August 28, 2011
Last Updated on August 28, 2011


Vinod Kumar U K
Vinod Kumar U K

Doha, Doha, Qatar

I am from India I would like to share my feelings to you frankly so please convey your views and verdicts of my posts. Poets are interacting prehistoric period until now all poems wrote in their mind.. more..


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