A Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

All are in the streets with balloons, bugels, and banners...


All are Busy on Roads

All are rushed at the park

All are gathered town square

This is the new Carnival


All are Singing and dancing

All are Holding Placards

All are Shouting slogans

This is the new Autumn


All are busy befire in offices

All are busy in the colleges

All are busy in bank and business

This time all are in the streets


You can call this down turn

You can explain it an employment problem

You can watch this a revolution

This time all are enjoying the Mass gathering.

© 2011 Vinod Kumar U K

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this is a poem where i can close my eyes, hear the music, see the children laughing and having a great time. listen to the elders talk about how much the kids are having fun and remebering the times that they use to do things like this when they were younger.. GREAT WRITE I LOVE IT... its everything a poem should be... making you SEEE the poem

Posted 10 Years Ago

Good write =] I like the "all are" repetition, followed by the "You can" stanza at the end. You very much succeed in conveying the feelings of mirth and excitement in this poem with the simple, but moving declarations at the end of each stanza. I'm guessing that English is not your first language, but even with a few semantic issues here and there, the poem still works and reads really well.

Posted 10 Years Ago

A nice change from the economic down turn I imagine. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I can imagine the busy people. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Bring on the cotton candy...nicely penned. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

I use to live in Brazil and attend Carnival right before Lent began.
I was a great time and people liked carnival because they were allowed to do whatever they wanted to do within the boundaries of the law and eating meat.
Carnival means meat eaters. Lucie

Posted 10 Years Ago

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7 Reviews
Added on October 10, 2011
Last Updated on October 10, 2011


Vinod Kumar U K
Vinod Kumar U K

Doha, Doha, Qatar

I am from India I would like to share my feelings to you frankly so please convey your views and verdicts of my posts. Poets are interacting prehistoric period until now all poems wrote in their mind.. more..