Four haiku written while walking - 3/24/12
A Poem by Weston R.
While walking today, I ended up writing these four haiku. 
Butterfly, black, orange pauses on a magnolia Flies into field
A hint of flower As magnolias quiver In the light spring breeze
Children babbling over the scuffling of feet On the cool sidewalk
Dead worm in a ditch Stiff and dry and lying still Died after the rain
© 2012 Weston R.
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Author's Note
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Thought I'd put haiku written at once all as one poem/title, instead of having four different ones.
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they each flow into one another. it's a pretty scene; the butterfly and the magnolia. what brings it down to earth is the proximity of the children and their obliviousness to the death of the worm. the poem starts with life and ends with death. excellent piece.
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Tags: four, haiku, magnolia, butterfly, children, worms, dead, spring, breeze, light
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Weston R.Milwaukee, WI
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