my bliss

dwelling even further now, i believe this was written during two different days months apart in early '04 before i graduated high school

In my arms you lay,
so many feelings
rush through my veins,
wanting so much to be,
everything you dream.

My heart pounds
for all of your attention.
The ticking clock
just won't start.
Emotionally overwhelmed,
I wish I could feel this way forever.

The pains of my life,
forgotten with your smile.
I used to dream of you like this,
I used to dream of you,
my bliss.
I hope I dream again.

In my eyes you stay,
so many things
 I would like to say.
Wanting, so much,
to live my every dream.

My heart screams
for you to see it.
The clock ticks by,
an emotional wreck.

Wanting to see you again,
dreaming of holding you again,
my bliss,
I hope I dream again.

In my thoughts you fade,
so many things
I never said.
Wanting so much,
to be any ones' dream.

My heart paints itself
of darker colors.
The clock has finally slowed,
unwanted emotions.

I wish I could get through this,
I hope I breathe life again,
I want to make you once more,
my bliss,
I hope I dream again.

Reviews

[Bubo]

I feel you take us back in time to when we have our first crush, and the joys iys brings, the way we feel in wanting to be held, dreaming of that special person........we never quite capture that again in adulthood.
I like the repetition, it works well, lovely wistful piece.


I wish I could get through this,
I hope I breathe life again,
I want to make you once more,
my bliss,
I hope I dream again.

[Emily B]

these are beautiful words