leave me....

leave me,

or hold onto me and be by my side!...

love me,

and i 'll love you more than my life!

i give you options,

finally...

and please,choose whatever you like!

let me know for sure,

because am enough of challenges but, i'll make one last sacrifice!...

i'll die in the pain..

i'll still not let you know!..

stay happy wherever you are,

but, never blame me....

for i loved you and will love you all my life!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and true words were shared in the poetry. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the amzing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Saumya]

Some people often fail to realize the pain and love behind anger...it hurts to let a love go, but when they are stubborn enough not to understand..It's better let them have their own say, fir love cannot be forced, and what is forced isn't love by any means.

The last stanza you wrote, is exactly what a true lover's mind prays.. Because one of the principal of love is to wish for the well-being of the person you love, no matter how much they ruin the other person.

Your portrayed your feelings very well, Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful poem :)

-Saumya

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes you are so very right...thank you so much for visiting and loving my work.

[Saumya]

You're welcome 😊

[Donicca Dona L]

ohh this part was so beautiful.

i'll die in the pain..
i'll still not let you know!..
stay happy wherever you are,
but, never blame me....
for i loved you and will love you all my life!

(stay happy wherever you are), this what you wish someone you love happiness no matter if that happiness is someone else and not you.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

you got that right....thank you so much Dona....

[Carol Cashes]

"...i'll die in the pain...i'll still ot let you know!" The best lines in this piece. Sometimes the madness has to stop and you have to say CHOOSE! I loved this.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much.....glad that you loved it!!

[Chase Dylan]

I take the pain of staying away, away from you this day... Challenges and options... Hah, well penned...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much silente....

[Chase Dylan]

Of course...!

[Jessica Lima]

Aww this is so sweet and painful. Good representation of the sacrifices one does for the person one loves.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks dear...

[Nora]

Lovely,
i'll die in the pain..
i'll still not let you know!.. those are my favorite 2 lines , keep going

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is amazing, it's a feeling of complete devotion to someone else. keep writing!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...

[Nora]

You are welcome

[Suhd]

So pure. Liked it. Keep up the good work gal !

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...suhd!

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is lovely, i enjoyed the whole poem

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...