If.

If.

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

If someone loves you truly,
they'll follow you everywhere...

If someone loves you truly,
and then,
You love writing...
then am damn sure they'll become writers anyway.

© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem


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Great work! I apologize for the late review, but anyway I liked this very much...keep up the good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


You love writing...
then am damn sure they'll become writers anyway
is it said in a ironical way??
cause i got that like that

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

yes....u got tht right...
Nice flow of thoughts dear Wajiha. You are right. If someone loved you. They will follow you. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

heheh....thank you soo much.
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
well, this is damn true Wajeeha damn true

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

thank you...wajiha btw!
I think that you should remind people that if someone truly loves them that they should always remain their own person.
Overall, i enjoyed this poem. Some grammar and wording could be fixed but the whole idea is good. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

hey..thanks for the feedback...yah!..that grammar was somewhere gone wrong..i promise u guys u won't.. read more
If someone loves you truly,
they'll follow you everywhere,
What you you love the most
Will now become their's,
Every single passion of yours
Is about what they care
And then it turns to be you,
Who madly loves writing,
Eventually your love casts the magic
And they too end up
becoming writer anyways.
Hey wajiha... it your peice was good but it's a little raw...your emotional concept is good and strong and i liked the interesting word you wanted to convey..but not many are getting it...you mean to say is
Theres a one who loves you
But you love writing
So your love makes them writer's as well...that they start to convey their feelings as writing's for you cause thats what you love and all they care about is what you love... I just put few lines moulding it. I hope it helps ...you can put them as it is but i would like you to add few more lines here and there in it...making it a cute visual....i know you can do it. Hope you dont mind my words... keep writing.Hope i was of help


Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

shukran shukran....i'll make sure i dnt do it the nest time...thanks dear for the concern
Last line is really confusing but i like it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

thanks so much farhan.
the last two lines are confusing. but the first few lines are good

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

hahha...ikr they are confusing...well, thanks.
Is it so?.....Does anything happened alike?....anyways I liked it...:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

yes it did...ask kwel bratt
Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

msg me.......
It's true..I feel something is missing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

btw wat's missing?
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You're welcome.
More of reality was missing in this poem. You could have written more about .. read more
Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

ohh sure sure..

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Wajiha Nayeem
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hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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