Too deep.

Too deep.

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!
Let the waves rise,
Let the tornado arrive,
My life I hope is destined to be bright....
I want to fly;
Fly, irrespective of any breaks..
Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares.
If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!
The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!!

© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem


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You just made me feel so empowered! It's so amazing, loved it so so much.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks dear.....
Anjali

6 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares.
If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!
These words boosted me and motivated..one of your best write

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

awww...thanks so mch farhan....
Amazing 😉
Keep writing....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks dear...
Very well written clear thoughts

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks friend...
I love this! Great message! Keep writing! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thank you!!!
Beautiful !Thank you for sharing :)!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

pleasure...thanks so much.
Oh yes! That determination in there is working on this poem. Nicely written. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thank you dear...!!!.
The best line that i can pick from it is-

If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!

Well written..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much.....!!
Your words flow with a beautifully positive message of hope and inspiration, nicely done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thank you so mch....
My dog would try to walk on water - he was astounded when he did once (but it was ice) then he fell through !! Hohoho lol


Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

haahhaa....

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Wajiha Nayeem
Wajiha Nayeem

hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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