Heavy Heart..

Heavy Heart..

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

My heart is heavy....
It's bursting into tears of blood!!
No, dear..
am fine!... There's no trouble.
but, my heart isn't beating.
My feet tremble,
My head aches...
I feel like am tired of walking,
baby, I'd hope you take and carry me in your arms!
Let me walk with you...
Baby, don't leave me alone ever,
Don't leave me behind!

© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem


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You are not fine...you need someone to share something of yours..apart from that the poem is as usual very well and nicely penned

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much......
I relate to this, it's not always easy to say how we really feel. Thanks for writing this. It's a lovely poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much...am glad u loved it...
Sometimes we aren't able to express what our heart feels inside. That moment we require silence and someone to hold us together, while we are breaking into pieces. and Its you who had perfectly designed the whole plot of this piece.........

:) Lovelyyyy work!
keep Goin!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

ohh......thanks so much....
Some strong imagery to support the emotional content of the poem should draw your readers deep into their own interpretation of the relationship. I love the surrealism feel and the way it reaches off the screen into my thoughts, masterfully done my friend Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

aww...thanks so much....i am gladd u lovedd it❤
An emotional, strong and heavy write Wajiha...
I was really hooked by the way you wrote this and made your emotions so clear to read...
Well done, keep it up!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thankssssss.......
Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

No problem :)
You have expressed your emotions really well. I liked the way you have written 'I am fine' after expressing your pain, that's what all of us do.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much...
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
It is a lovely poem filled with true emotions and feelings. It also tells about what you have pain in your heart. Having read whole poem one feels your pain and emotions that you have attempted to word in this beautiful piece of wrings. I hope one day you will find your perfection. Nice job, Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much dear.
SZHZIA

6 Years Ago

It was my pleasure and you are welcome. :-)
Yaa true abt feelings of every person who love truely......👍💖

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much sohaill....
A heartfelt poem...and I really loved it
and beautiful too..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

thanks so much....
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

my pleasure.
Is it parent and child......
If it is than this work is deep....
Keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

well, that's upto you whether you wanna imagine this poem as a parent and child one or the love betw.. read more

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Wajiha Nayeem
Wajiha Nayeem

hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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